Transyltown 103
Hey guys, I’ve been silent for a while. Been getting used to my new work schedule, resting and not really doing a whole lot of drawing, but now I’m getting back into things. It feels good to be drawing Timmy and the gang again after about a week. As a reminder I’m slowing things down a little with only one page update in December, but will pick things back up in January.
Southpaw’s turned up the heat. Will they get an incontestable win this time?
Typo in the fourth panel. “Hes” is missing an apostraphe. 😛
Also, O_O;;; Beta’s a GUY!?
Lol. Beta is indeed a guy. You aren’t the first I’ve gotten that response from. (It doesn’t help that because of that I purposely started trying to make him look more feminine, lol)
In the course of fixing that typo I edited a few others things.
-I forgot the announcer’s intercom’s no longer working… opps… So I had Timmy do his exposition.
-merged two of River’s off panel dialog boxes, so it doesn’t seem like someone else is talking too.
-added that little joke in panel 5. It was originally gonna be there anyway. I don’t remember why I cut it, but you helped me see that it was appropriate.
*side note* I was gonna have Alicia do a gag about Beta’s sex in page 99, but but it because I trying to set her and Alfa up as rivals.
Alicia’s going to be a VERY unhappy girl and there are going to be two hurted pups when she catches up to them.